Critique this poem please...?**XXX?

Sounds pretty good, lots of emotions. Main issue is punctuation. The only lines that I think need rephrasing are "Please don't leave me" "Why do you do this to me?" I just think these lines lack the strong vocabulary that was used throughout the rest of the poem. Maybe change it to "never fall from my side" or something more poetic. However, the author makes the final cut. It's the author's decision. Good luck!